Last week our class each wrote our own scary stories, this is mine.
THE TALES OF INTERESTING EVENTS The grizzling noises of Saturn hill were almost too much for its neighbors in the town of Moha county, if the old ditch of Mad canyon wasn’t there they wouldn’t hear half of it, so one unlucky day the mayor of Moha county had an idea. “If Mad county aint there the sounds that that savage man makes up on Saturn hill won’t disturb us” announced the mayor “Who is the man up on Saturn hill Mayor” Questioned the young new council member “Well young man we don’t know who he is only the elders know but they never say his name” “he’s probably just a crazy old man, nothing to worry about” “that's why tomorrow we are filling in the canyon.” The next day all the folks of moha county started filling in the canyon. By the end of the day Mad canyon was halfway filled up with dirt. In the morning everyone had arrived at the council hall for celebration, everybody except for the main elder, his name was old man Greg everybody knew who he was and everybody noticed that he wasn't there. The dogs went out sniffing but only came back with a rabbit, the kids searched in all the houses and saloon’s and didn’t find nothing, the council only knew one thing: he aint in Moha county and he was too old and tired to have the strength to leave. Finally the mayor announced “ladies and gents we got ourselves a kidnapping.” So the celebration stopped and everyone just went back to filling up Mad canyon. The next morning the sheriff of Moha county Bill Goats went out up to saturn hill to go check for old man Greg he went by himself because he was the only one with the guts to go out there, the elders begged him not to go which was kind of alarming but they didn’t say why, so he just carried all on. That afternoon Bill's horse came up back to Town but when the mayor came to check on bill all he found was two long fingered skeletal hands tightly gripping the reins then as soon as he called the council to come and see, the hands slowly dropped the reins and dissolved. Suddenly Lightning and thunder struck through the once bright blue sky then amid flames and shadows the old man of Saturn hill arose and spoke “the time’s of Moha County and Mad canyon are over!!” then complete darkness enfulged the town and the canyon totally destroying them, then only Saturn hill remained even the old man of saturn hill himself was nowhere to be seen. And that's why i've been imprisoned here ever since in the roots of saturn hill all i could do is write this book.
-Bill Goats sheriff of Moha county
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Kia ora Cole, I like how you included a catchy title and a good ending. Maybe next time you could ask a question or set a challenge?
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DeleteHi Phill thanks for commenting. I think next time i will set a challenge.
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