Wednesday, 25 September 2019

pobble 365 story: number 28

The gigantic metal figure strode down the town,he must of been 500 metres tall, people were scared they stared at his big metallic body as they were scared as a rat fighting a dragon with nothing but a toothpick. 28 was engraved on his forearm in a glowing yellow font. He walked on scanning the street  for the culprit as he ignored the houses, pylons and stores as he walked past and smashed anything in its path. Finally he spotted a man running away from him in a long black cloak the giant robot mech grabbed him and took of the hood it was the person he was looking for, he jumped and fire rocketed from his metal boots as he flew away back to home base for the culprit to be charged at court.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 September 2019 at 09:21

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  4. Tara Coleman18 October 2019 at 13:50

    I love this story. I would not like to fight a dragon with a toothpick and I thought your use of that imagery to show the emotion of fear was awesome Cole. Don't forget the full-stops!

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