Hi Cole Your book on Sir Edmund Hillary's journey to Mt Everest seemed very short. Remember to use some of that fantastic vocabulary you know to add detail to your story and to help paint an image in the reader's mind. Please also remember to edit your work before posting to check for errors.
Hi Cole
ReplyDeleteYour book on Sir Edmund Hillary's journey to Mt Everest seemed very short. Remember to use some of that fantastic vocabulary you know to add detail to your story and to help paint an image in the reader's mind. Please also remember to edit your work before posting to check for errors.