Hi Cole, It is clear that you have spent some time working on the pictures for your timeline. Are you aware that some of your images and facts do not have any dates/years with them. Having these will help your audience learn some facts. Could you please also consider adding some other events to your timeline (after Sir Edmund Hillary climbed Everest and before he died), as I am sure that he would have accomplished things.
Hi Cole,
ReplyDeleteIt is clear that you have spent some time working on the pictures for your timeline. Are you aware that some of your images and facts do not have any dates/years with them. Having these will help your audience learn some facts. Could you please also consider adding some other events to your timeline (after Sir Edmund Hillary climbed Everest and before he died), as I am sure that he would have accomplished things.